how to access harrenhal in progress

external/access/harrenhal-access/harrenhal-access.md

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 # HARRENHAL access
 
-HARRENHAL is a gateway to provide our external collaborators access to specific servers that are hosted at the LCSB via a web browser.
+HARRENHAL is a gateway to provide our external collaborators access to servers that are hosted at the LCSB via a web browser.
 
 ## How to access HARRENHAL website ?
 
-With your favorite web browser go to [HARRENHAL](https://harrenhal.uni.lu)
+Launch your favorite web browser and go to [HARRENHAL](https://harrenhal.uni.lu)
 
-## First time on HARRENHAL
+## First time on HARRENHAL ?
 
 1. Enter your credentials
 
    * Username - firstname.lastname
-   * Password - Temporary password provided by Sysadmins.
+   * Password - Temporary password provided by LCSB's sysadmins.
    * Click **Login**
 
    <img src="img/login_01.png" height="300px"><br/>
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ With your favorite web browser go to [HARRENHAL](https://harrenhal.uni.lu)
 2. Reset your temporary password
 
    * New Password - New password that you want to use.
-   * Confirm New Password - Same new password.
+   * Confirm New Password - Confirm the new password.
    * Click **Continue**
 
    <img src="img/login_02.png" height="300px"><br/>
@@ -35,43 +35,43 @@ With your favorite web browser go to [HARRENHAL](https://harrenhal.uni.lu)
 3. Configure the two-factor authentication.
 
    * Scan the QR code with your favorite two-factor authentication app. Or click **show** to display the TOTP key.
-   * Enter the 6-digit authentication provided by your two-factor authentication app.
+   * Enter the 6-digit authentication code provided by your two-factor authentication app.
    * Click **Continue**
 
    <img src="img/login_03.png" height="300px"><br/>
 
-**Note**- Do not forget to backup your two-factor authentication app account or the TOTP key. And keep it secret.
+**Note:** Do not forget to backup your two-factor authentication app account or the TOTP key.
 
-## Login to your HARRENHAL account
+## How to login to your HARRENHAL account ?
 
 Once you successfully complete the password reset and the two-factor authentication enrollment processes, you can login now to your HARRENHAL account.
 
 1. Enter your credentials
 
    * Username - firstname.lastname
-   * Password - Password you have set
+   * Password - Password you have set.
    * Click **Login**
 
    <img src="img/login_01.png" height="300px"><br/>
 
 2. Enter your two-factor authentication code
 
-   * Authentication Code - 6-digit code provided by your two-factor authentication app.
+   * Authentication Code - 6-digit authentication code provided by your two-factor authentication app.
    * Click **Continue**
 
    <img src="img/login_04.png" height="300px"><br/>
 
-## Access to a VM
+## How to access a VM ?
 
 1. On your homepage under **ALL CONNECTIONS** section, you can view all the VMs that you are allowed to connect to by clicking on the drop list button.
 
    <img src="img/all_connections_01.png" height="300px"><br/>
 
-2. Access to a VM in the list by clicky on it.
+2. Access to a VM in the list by clicking on it.
 
    <img src="img/server_01.png" height="300px"><br/>
 
-## Change your password
+## How to change your password ?
 
 Go to your account menu and click **Settings**
 
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    * Click **Update Password**
 
    <img src="img/change_password_01.png" height="300px"><br/>
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